Coming up with the topic for my essay was hard because I have across a lot of things in my 18 years of life

Coming up with the topic for my essay was hard because I have across a lot of things in my 18 years of life, but when I had to think of a topic that had to evaluated I was like why not make it informative, and I got to typing. I decided to stick on this topic because this was one of the things that I believed not a lot of people were informed on and the thing that makes me, me. Brainstorming was the most effective way for me to getting the body for my paper. I felt like the feedback from my peers gave me more confidence in my paper than before it. One comment helped me reread my essay and to add more detail to it. I didn’t really make any changes to my rough draft, I may have changed a couple of words to make the paper sound more professional but that’s the only difference. My favorite thing about my final draft is